Never Thought- The Commentaries: Chapter 25

[sorakh28]

i get knocked down, but i get up again, you're never gonna keep me down

Chapter 25's title is taken from "Tubthumping" by Chumbawamba

I purposely called Altea 2: Electric Boogaloo because honestly, it feels like a re-hash of Break/Shake, except that Tiki and the newcomers are with them. There are some differences, however!

Like the whole thing with Est and Abel. We reversed the roles than in canon because in my head, having Abel as the prisoner instead of Est made more sense since he's the Altean, and because it's our story- we can change shit! I love writing Ange as a voice of reason, mostly because she's usually the silly one. XP

Also this is where I get to use cool stuff I learned online- the carnyx is this ancient celtic war horn, and I thought it would be cool to include it into Macedonean lore- in this case, they announce a hostage rescue.

AND THE BULL AND PANTHER ARE REUNITED AGAIN MY BROOOOOOS.

...Yeah, chapter is chapter, I guess. XP

Comments

[sarajayechan]

Like the whole thing with Est and Abel. We reversed the roles than in canon because in my head, having Abel as the prisoner instead of Est made more sense since he's the Altean

YES. I get what the original game did, but this is our story. Therefore, tiny pegasus knight ANGWY her husband got captured because Altean. XD

(Just like Palla got pissed when Lykke tried to go after Minerva...hope the enemy is taking notes and doesn't plan to snap up Warren anytime soon. XD)

We need to write a side story for the bros, lol. They've been through quite a bit even before B/S proper, what with hurrying Marth out of Altea in the past.

[sorakh28]

OH GOD. The angst those two would provide with what happened with Marth... Like, what happened on the SHIP.

[sarajayechan]

YES.