Never Thought- The Commentaries: Chapter 27

[sorakh28]

tell me where's your dad?

Chapter 27's title is taken from "Papaoutai" by Stromae

YOU WEREN'T EXPECTING THIS TO RETURN, DID YOU?

I love the somberness in the first paragraph, and I love the call-back of the prologue with Marth. And Ange wearing her father's red was just... poetic.

And yes, cinquefoil does mean "beloved daughter" in floriography! I just adore how Ange loves her Poppa despite never meeting him, and how Anri communicates to his family beyond the afterlife. I LOVE THE LOWELLS SO MUCH, GUYS.

We added a new character from the group of assassins, and explored them a little deeper! But I absolutely adored writing Marth's reaction to all of this. He's clearly affected by all of this, despite his character growth, and it's not a complete fallback! It's a moment of weakness that he can still control bits and pieces of! He knows what he needs and gently requests it!

Which continues in the last paragraph. I love writing Marth/Caeda in this series, they just GET each other.

Comments

[sarajayechan]

YEP. Marth may have grown since the very first days as an official Lord, but Altea's seen some bad times and once again he's reminded that Lady Eremiya's children are loyal to a fault.

(I'm actually re-reading B/S, lol)

[sorakh28]

POST YOUR FAVORITE QUOTES I'D LOVE TO SEE WHAT STILL STICKS. xp