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It was rather an eclectic group of people working with the Dreikreuz. There were some familiar faces and obvious new ones, and the many difference machines that rests in the hangars. And yet he couldn't help but stop at one in particular; a silvery bird knight mech shining brightly amongst them, demanding his attention.

She is the Wind; a Cosmic Wind that blows even in space, singing, calling out to those who dare to lend out their ears and hear Her Voice. Alien and yet familiar, the sort of comfort that trying out one's new favorite dish gives to someone... that's what it felt like to stare at the Cybuster. He couldn't place how this machine spoke to him, but spoke to him she did, and she was loud.

(She was different than speaking to the spirits of the dead as a Newtype. No, this was alive, commanding her existence as a living being, and he felt a difference pressure about it than what Newtype powers does to him. And, quite frankly, he doesn't know why he perceives this as given the pronoun 'she' in the first place.)

"Y'know, you've been staring at Cybuster for quite some time," came a voice behind him. "What's that about, anyway?"

And he forgot about the pilot. The pilot who was behind him, cats at his shoulders, arms crossed, sightly taller than him.

(He is the Wind, too, the Wind Given Human Flesh; mercurial and perspective, timeless wisdom hidden in a teenager. Just as alive as the living being within the Cybuster.)

"Sorry, it's just... there's something about her that's nagging behind my head," Kamille admitted. "There's... something pulling me towards your Cybuster, and I can't identify it."

(TBC)

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He rested his head against Clay's chest. That heartbeat that almost stopped completely, now beating strongly with a healthy rhythm in his ear. As rhythmically was the sound of Clay's breathing, even and relaxed. He sighed contently at the sounds, tightening his hold around his newly minted lover.

"You seem to be comfortable," Clay spoke, his voice rumbling through his chest, his hand rubbing Apollo's back tenderly.

"You are comfortable," the lawyer answered, a bit of a blush forming on his cheeks. "I can't believe we waited so for this. I... I love this, Clay. This feels... just like heaven on earth."

"I agree." Lips was pressed on Apollo's forehead. "This is beyond my dreams..."

~*~*~

{Do you think they'll get married?}

Phoenix was glad he wasn't drinking anything, because that would've been the perfect moment for a spittake. He turned to Gallade. "I'm sorry, where in the Reverse World did that came from?!"

{Please, after what happened last year, it wouldn't be a surprise,} Gallade noted. {That they're officially boyfriends means there's a possibility of them marrying, and I personally think it's a matter of time.}

"You really think so, don't you..." Phoenix tried to put his mind into it, but... it was rather strange. Sure, Apollo lived and became an adult without his influence, but he can't help feeling... fatherly when it came to the younger lawyer. That Apollo was actually Trucy's older brother didn't help much, either.

Thinking of Apollo marrying in general... it made him feel old.

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"Apollo..." Clay intertwined their fingers together. "How... do you say 'I love you' in Khura'inese?"

Apollo could feel his pulse throb against his bracelet. A soft chuckle came out of him before he told Clay the words, the astronaut repeating them as best as he could.

"That's... pretty good for your first try." Apollo pressed his forehead against Clay's. "It sounds right hearing you say that. Like it was meant to be this way."

"Makes me happy to hear that," Clay said. "I'm glad you're willing to share so much with me... it makes you feel whole."

~*~*~*~

"...I had an inkling you and Clay were in love with each other," Red teased. Taranis nodded to his trainer's words. "So did Taranis and Ivan, incidentally."

Apollo's face went bright red, almost the same hue as his outfit. "You could tell?!"

"You two reminded me of my parents when they're together," Red elaborated. "And, honestly, the way you worry about me... it's like being worried by Mom, I have to admit."

I never thought things could get this awkward, Apollo realized. "So if I'm like your mother..."

"Oh, not entirely! Like, your personalities are different. And Dad and Mr. Terran. I just..." Red's grin turned crooked. "It felt comfortable, I mean. Like a favorite comfort meal... you know?"

"Well, if that's what you meant by it, I'm... I'm kinda flattered." Apollo rubbed the back of his head in embarrassment, however.

~*~*~*~

"At this rate, considering your apartment, you and Clay might have to go to a love hotel for some privacy," Phoenix told his fellow lawyer with a grin.

"M-M-Mr. Wright!?" Never had he heard Apollo's voice got that high of an octave, or go as perfectly red as his suit. "What are you talking about?!"

"As the closest thing to a father figure you have, please make sure to be responsible should the two of you go far... I'm sure you had the appropriate education in school, Apollo."

"Mr. Wright!"

"Ah, and I hope to meet up with Clay again, to offer him my blessing and congratulations. You're a very lucky man, indeed."

"Mr. Wright!"
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Clothing color scheme: Green -> Blue-ish green (Pine green?)
Hair color: Red -> Gold-ish
Eye Color: Blue-Green
Hair length: Shorter! ->Cute AF
Artstyle: Anime
Alter Ego: Yes -> To go around places with Link unnoticed.
Magical Powers: Magical Combat Arsenal
Body Type: Athletic And Lean
Skin Undertones: Neutral -> Tanned
Story Role: Protagonist (Solo) -> She and Link are childhood friends
Age: Young Adult
Parents: Mother -> Had good relationship with both parents (before dad kicked the bucket) -> Mom Royal, Dad guard captain
Siblings: Two Siblings
Raised By Impa: Yes
Height: Tall for her age -> Taller than most Hylians
Mischief: Rulebreaker when it suits her
Triforce piece: Wisdom
Hair texture: Loose curls
Visible Triforce: In eyes when using powers
Royal Dress Skirt Length: Ankle Length
Fighting Style: Battlemage
Cape: Capelet
Instrument: One used in a prior game
Pasttime: Horseback archery
Royal Dress Headwear: Hair half-covered veil
Romantic Interest: Bi/Pan
Gender: Non-Binary
Is Zelda actually "Zelda": Zelda is a ceremonial name for royal/religious purposes
Unique physical characteristic: Freckles
Glasses: Yes
Dominant Hand: Ambidextrous
Sidelocks: Short bound
Casual Outfit: Tunic
Royal Dress Shoes: Fancy Leather Boots
Royal Dress Sleeves: Long
Ear Shape: Long & Pointy
Royal Dress Jewelry: Hylia materia with cool colored stones
Aware of Bad Times: Totally Aware
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this is the voice that shakes me; this is the sound that breaks me

Epilogue 2's title comes from "This Is The Voice" by Oysterband

BEST LYRIC COINCIDENCE EVER.

Yep, we're in the Awakening Era! I always wanted to make a distant epilogue for this story. We might focus on a side-story involving the Awakening Era in the future, but I really wanted to start it here.

I went post Chapter 4 of Awakening here for the narrative. I also like the twinned PoV of these two, their perspectives are unique!

Ange's capabilities with Falchion didn't die out! And I love her proper introduction. I called her the "Living Legacy" because in the end, that is what she is- Anri's legacy. ...And now I just realized we made parallels between Ange and Lucina.

And yes, Ange does give Lucina Marth's novel! And I absolutely love that the last words of Marth's, in the dedication, is honoring the fallen Hardin- making the story of Never Thought full circle.
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and when the madness stops

Epilogue 1's title is taken from "Break Me, Shake Me" by Savage Garden

I love it when the song you use as story titles has the perfect epilogue one. It really makes it full circle.

And we have ending blurbs in this like in the game! There's this sense of finality with that. So most of my commentary will be on the differences from canon.

I love the little mentions of stuff we added into the story, and having Cecil think of her former first Platoonmates was really sweet.

Then we have our OC trio! I love all of their endings, it fits with their characterization. Also I love their titles! Sara and I made good choices, I feel!

KATARINA AND RHIANNON AAAAAAAHHH I LOVE THEIR HAPPIER ENDINGS. Those two deserved it.

We also updated Marisha's ending! Mostly because Marisha's canon one made us sad. XP Also WARREN/CATRIA IS CANON, we might as well give Catria some happiness too.

Minerva/Palla was revealed in a sidestory, so it was great to properly confirm here.

AND THE TALYS CREW. I'M GLAD THEY'RE STILL AROUND TO HELP OUT MARTH AND CAEDA.

The Julian/Lena crew is fun! I love the changes to Matthis and Rickard- I suggested the changes for the latter because I knew Marth could see legal potential in lockpicking skills.

Archanea and Sirius... I love they eventually have happy endings. And I love the Horace/Nyna implications, too.

Ah, and we switch ending roles between Minerva and Michalis. That change makes the whole War Monk/Cleric thing in Awakening make more sense.

Other changes I wanna point out are Abel/Est and Navarre/Phina, I love them very much. AND AURELIS UGH. The Wolfguard makes me sad.

Now, we've reached Altea. ...Do I really need to comment on Altea? It's what to expect with how the narrative went! Even Kris! ...The only thing that confuses me is that Marth is "Prince of Light" instead of "Hero-King", but he was known as "Prince of Altea" in the canon epilogue, so I'm okay with that choice.
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in the end i will just defy you

Chapter 35's title comes from "As I am" from Dream Theater

I can't remember if I ever listened to Dream Theater before, metal's a genre I don't listen as much.

We smooshed two chapters together, because narratively it would have been hard to write two different chapters here, and they're both endgame chapters so it's not like we're missing much.

TONE THE FUCK DOWN, WOLF. Holy shit. Also lol at Sedgar suggesting Gharnef may be a masochist.

And of course we had to have a scene of Gharnef panicking. I just love the fact that we get to see his thoughts about the Maia matter, and it's just... (chef's kiss) amazing.

Final battle against Gharnef, or as Marth called him, Envy Incarnated. And I love Marth's quote of "I have no breath to waste" because Gharnef doesn't deserve a call-out against him if he's gonna die, anyway. AND WE GOT NYNA TO DO THE FINAL BLOW because she deserves to, Gharnef made her life hell! And I like that Jubelo gets to burn Imhullu.

Next, Medeus. Yes, it was easy to get Maia back- mostly because Anri was around. And I brought back the sweet tart nickname for Ange! <3 Then Medeus goes blah for the last time.

I love how the four maidens offered their gratitude to Maia for protecting them with her sacrifice- more nods to canon I love. Then we cement Xane/Ange, amongst other ships! Now Marth and Caeda can finally, FINALLY, get married like they planned in the prologue stage!
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friend of mine stay alive don't you leave me here

Chapter 34's title comes from "Friend of Mine" by Eve 6

Don't know the band, but the lyrics were perfect for this chapter.

Oh, we're going straight for the Wolf/Sedgar. Everyone can see it except them. XP With more battle planning, of course.

And more lore! Ange might have nightvision but doesn't always like using it, Jugdrali torch staves... as for the circlet that was gifted to Maia, guess which alt of Marth in Heroes wears said circlet. (Hint- three that doesn't have it are Default, Child and Engage Marth.)

NAGI! I love her and I'm glad she's back. But of course Wolf brings trouble again. So how many swords does Ange have by now? (Answer: Three- Ladyblade, Killing Edge, and Armorslayer.) Also I love that Nyna was being a firm, reasonable leader for a scene- she got to be badass in this story in her own way.

And then we get a scene with Wolf and Sedgar. Like Marth said, everyone obviously wants to chew out Wolf for his recklessness, but only Sedgar is the one who can get through him. I recall seeing the sentence part "Give them the full degree" in one of SRW30's DLC missions and thought it would make sense to write that in this part. BUT YES, START THE SHIPPING, FOCUS ON THE ANGST, IT'S AWESOME.

And Gotoh makes his last appearance. :/ Side stories involving him would be cool to write.
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leading you down into my core where I've become so numb

Chapter 33's title is taken from "Bring Me To Life" by Evanescence

ONE OF MY BIGGEST PET PEEVES IS CALLING THIS SONG "WAKE ME UP INSIDE". (cough) Okay but listen, I think I was big into Melee when this album came out. Surely some fans made Melee AMVs to this song using Marth.

I always like writing battle planning, and this one is no exception. And if you think my Melee mention beforehand was just random... NOPE, MARTH MELEE GRAB REFERENCE. And of course it was towards Wolf, Sara and I thought it made the most sense.

Speaking of Wolf, yeah he's gonna be belligerent in wanting to do things his way, as expected. There's a certain fun in exploring that part of Wolf I can't describe...

God I love Marth and Michalis' convo here. I love the changes we did to Michalis, it's a fun alternate approach to him. Especially with what we planned for him.

MAIA LORE MAIA LORE MAIA LORE. While reviewing Leif's wiki pages, I check on the Gáe Blog, and it's also known as the Earth Lance... of course the gears in my brain started to turn, and it would make sense on a narrative level to explain just how powerful Maia is that she's one of the Twelve Dragons of Jugdralian history... and I go with the idea that Bantu was Salamander. Maia was a teenager at the time, too.

Sirius and Wolf. I love how Sirius' character development works here, and how Marth sides with him! He's not entirely forgiven but Marth has seen first-hand how much he's changed! I love this final paragraph because it goes full circle for Sirius and I LOVE IT!
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shadow, won't you stay with me? nothing's ever what it seems

Chapter 32's title is taken from "Into The Mist" by Eivør

I love Eivør's music, and the English version of her album "Slør" is just as fantastic as the Faroese version. I was glad I was able to use some of her lyrics for this project!

Eyup, that's how we start- a post-passion wake-up moment with Marth and Caeda. Considering they had to kill one of their wedding VIPs, I don't blame them for needing something to ease their pains, even if temporarily. God I love the angst.

...Ah, yes. Ange being a mom to Wolf. I really wanted the "chip off the old block" vibe that she's much more similar to Maia than one thinks, and this was a good opportunity. Also her seeming to quote Hardin is because she gets Wolf and knows exactly how to get him to do what he needs to do.

And Xane proceeds to flirt with Ange. Which gets her off guard. Which is so cute. :3

Spreading some seed on reasons why Nyna gave the Archanean throne to Marth in this AU. It also makes sense in canon as well (coughLangcough) but it makes the more sense in here. Also yes, there's that joke about humans being yummy with ketchup for dragons. XP And now, we began the showdown with Eremiya.

Ange has nightvision as a Sea Dragon, which is why she can see in low light. (Yes, there is a comment further in the story where she complains about the darkness. Just because she has nightvision doesn't mean she enjoys it, and sometimes it annoys her. Not here.) And hooooooly shit is Marth pissed at Eremiya. And oh, did Ange added a middle name to herself? "If Marth can have one, so can I!" And yes, she chooses her Poppa's first love. That's how much Ange cares about his life, and the life he didn't have.

Yeah, Sara changed the whole 'brainwashing' thing with Eremiya. Makes a whole lot more sense. As for Ange suddenly glowing, well, she did use something similar back in Break/Shake to help out Julian and Lena... remember?

And yes we have the knockoff tomes. ...I just realized Aura doesn't come back in Awakening.
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in the story i wrote, you can fly freely

Chapter 31's title is taken from "Byakumu no Mayu -Ricordando il passato-" by Shikata Akiko

Of course I would use a tear jerker of a song for this chapter. When I suggested it to Sara, she knew it was perfect, too.

Man, Hardin fighting off his possession is just... poetically angsty. I love it.

PYRATHI AND THE RESISTANCE TOGETHER IN HELPING MARTH HELL YEAH! The planning has that layer of angst to it, but I also love how we tied in everything that has been mentioned prior- that Gharnef's main focus is on Hardin, mainly. And yes, Ange's rallying cry was to reveal that everyone knows what's going on. XP

Since we didn't mentioned Dolph, Tomas and Macellan before, we decided that they were taken prisoner... so thanks to the resistance, they were saved! ...And Marth is planning something I wanted to do back when he was facing Lamia, but didn't have the opportunity until now.

And that is taking off his circlet. And yes, another Polaris mention! And yes, Marth speaking directly to Gharnef is intentional, he knows who's actually in control... Then comes the Cornelius reference. Of course it was going to come full circle with Marth and Hardin.

I love that we had Hardin place the Darksphere in the Binding Shield. Narrative-wise I love the symbolism of it.

Yep, Ange still has Marth's circlet, he's too overwhelmed at the moment to ask it back. And now, the endgame is truly starting- it's time to stop Gharnef once and for all.
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even the voice that condemned me can no longer be heard; but beyond the door I could still feel you

Chapter 30's title is taken from "Again" by Lost Universe

Again, more battle planning, which is always fun. Also yes, they did picked up the second Iote's Shield, we forgot to mention it beforehand. And yes, it's the return of tea in a tankard- what, you think Marth stopped doing that? XP

And we're following canon in getting the Wolfguard. I love this group because of how they demonstrate different forms of loyalty... and Wolf is such a tragic character. I think leaving Wolf to Sara was a pretty good idea, she really knows how to write someone like him to the nines.

Yep, no interaction with Mannu in this fic, but at the very least Pyrathi's part of the battle in Pales, they're mentioned; unlike in canon, where they were just a random nation of dragons that you had to attack and they never come back in the story. Hell, Pyrathi is completely skipped in Book 1 of Mystery! So even if there's no dialogue, I'm glad to bring in Pyrathi in this.

AND WE FINALLY HAVE MARTH AND ELICE TALK AGAIN. I missed writing those two together, so I'm glad we get to have them talk again. ...And yes, for a while I wanted to talk about my headcanon aunt for them, Mared. Since it was strange that Cornelius wasn't following the "Mar" motif of the Altean Royal family, I headcanon that Marth and Elice had an aunt that left the continent because of Cornelius' attitude. (Game canon-wise, she left for a different reason that I still haven't figured out yet.)
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can't we just pretend that this war never began

Chapter 29's title stems from "Brother My Brother" by Blessid Union of Souls

HOLY SHIT TALK ABOUT A BLAST FROM THE PAST EEEEEY POKÉMON THE FIRST MOVIE. (cough) It was appropriate.

I love that we kept with the canon part of Roshea questioning about being against Marth, and how Hardin was good friends with our boy.

"I wanna suggest something... with a Manakete perspective." "You're prone to that, but alright, go on." I was poking fun on how Ange tends to strategize things in the series, but she does have legit good ideas! That's why she's Jagen's aide! Oh, and of course I'm gonna bring back Pyrathi's dragons, even if it's through dialogue and no physical appearances. That they're willing to help out humans because of what happened to one of theirs is just... so poetic.

Also the whole thing with Ange and the rope. And how Marth noticed that perhaps Xane has a thing for Ange... honestly Xane/Ange was not planned, but I love how they ended up together because... well, they're perfect together, really. XP They're absolutely fun to write together.

Oh yeah, the King of Aurelis, that we named Taliesin. I was kinda happy we get to have him in the story again, since he does provide plot material to the story, as in the Lifesphere and telling the Wolfguard to skedaddle away from the area (of which Wolf isn't impressed about, of course.

We're getting closer to the endgame...
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don't let yourself go; your last chance has arrived

Chapter 28's title is taken from "Butterflies and Hurricanes" by Muse

Ooooh, I just love the juxtaposition of Sheena's thoughts and Marth's plans. It just shows how Marth's kind-hearted nature bleeds into his strategies and how it catches people off-guard. As Lucina says, "Rescuing your allies and driving back your foes in one fell swoop! Beloved not only by his comrades, but known to charm his enemies as well." I still wanted to keep that across.

Also, Ange tends to handle the Fire Emblem when Marth isn't using it, because of how Anri communicates with it. AND I BROUGHT BACK THE CARNYX. It's because I love ancient stuff. Also lol at Navarre wanting to spar with anyone. Why would he spar with Ange when she's a girl? Because he's not stupid- he's seen her in action, she knows how to wield a blade, she can clearly take care of herself, she's an exception for his women rule.

AND WE GET SHEENA AND SAMSON. Back when I was playing Heroes, Sheena was one of my favorites because her Res was practically equal to her Def in that game. She was a freaking rockstar so I'm glad we finally have her in the story!

Frost makes me laugh a bit, so I added on with Ange being absolutely blindsided by his arrival. God I love little silly scenes like this.

AND WE'RE PLANNING ON TAKING BACK ARCHANEA AND STOPPING GHARNEF'S HOLD ON HARDIN. Marth isn't happy this had to come to pass, but in the end, it's his duty as Hardin's friend to do the unimaginable. Which ties in with Masou Kishin and the Super Robot Wars EX Masaki Route events. God I love making stupid voice actor connections.
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tell me where's your dad?

Chapter 27's title is taken from "Papaoutai" by Stromae

YOU WEREN'T EXPECTING THIS TO RETURN, DID YOU?

I love the somberness in the first paragraph, and I love the call-back of the prologue with Marth. And Ange wearing her father's red was just... poetic.

And yes, cinquefoil does mean "beloved daughter" in floriography! I just adore how Ange loves her Poppa despite never meeting him, and how Anri communicates to his family beyond the afterlife. I LOVE THE LOWELLS SO MUCH, GUYS.

We added a new character from the group of assassins, and explored them a little deeper! But I absolutely adored writing Marth's reaction to all of this. He's clearly affected by all of this, despite his character growth, and it's not a complete fallback! It's a moment of weakness that he can still control bits and pieces of! He knows what he needs and gently requests it!

Which continues in the last paragraph. I love writing Marth/Caeda in this series, they just GET each other.
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I'm following up on Sara's lead and did a Break/Shake inspired journal change! I even redid my super-ancient icon of Marth and look at it! It's so pretty now and now I'm very tempted to make a Break/Shake Marth muse journal. XP
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with a soldier's eyes

Chapter 26's title is taken from "Soldier's Eyes" by Jack Savoretti

Another song I don't know personally, but suits the chapter perfectly.

Another homecoming, but considering what stayed in Altea, it's not gonna be a nice one for the Altea crew.

AND WE HAVE THE RECENT KNIGHTS TALKING ABOUT THEIR TIME TOGETHER. Pinuccio is back! God I love this team.

Oh, yeah, on the whole deal of what makes Gharnef dangerous. It's also kinda an insight on how easy it was for him to pull off what happened in canon- no one put two and two together in that story! The reason why it wasn't as successful with this Marth is because Nyna and Hardin didn't get married, and the four maidens weren't captured.

...Yeah, we decided to make this a complete tragedy. It gives Marth and the Altean more motivation for breaking Gharnef apart, and... well. We wanted the readers to be angry for these characters.

AND WE GET FALCHION EARLY... but as it turns out, it had consequences, tying it to why it was a tragedy.
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i get knocked down, but i get up again, you're never gonna keep me down

Chapter 25's title is taken from "Tubthumping" by Chumbawamba

I purposely called Altea 2: Electric Boogaloo because honestly, it feels like a re-hash of Break/Shake, except that Tiki and the newcomers are with them. There are some differences, however!

Like the whole thing with Est and Abel. We reversed the roles than in canon because in my head, having Abel as the prisoner instead of Est made more sense since he's the Altean, and because it's our story- we can change shit! I love writing Ange as a voice of reason, mostly because she's usually the silly one. XP

Also this is where I get to use cool stuff I learned online- the carnyx is this ancient celtic war horn, and I thought it would be cool to include it into Macedonean lore- in this case, they announce a hostage rescue.

AND THE BULL AND PANTHER ARE REUNITED AGAIN MY BROOOOOOS.

...Yeah, chapter is chapter, I guess. XP
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make another hit like a smash i’m climbing

Chapter 24's title is taken from "Arrival" from WAR*HALL

Don't know the band, nor the song, but I'll take any appropriate Smash jokes sent my way. :3

Battle planning is always fun to write, especially when it involves unique staves. And of course Gotoh contacts the crew- I love it when Ange interacts with him, you can tell she respects him and yet is still Ange.

AND WE GET TIKI BACK! I love that Bantu and Xane followed Marth, Tiki would've like to see more Manaketes in the group.

Getting the information needed to stop Gharnef and his hold on Hardin was part of canon, so it made sense to keep it in. It also helped develop more of the added lore of the Break/Shake series, and how game canon ties into it.

And then we finished up with the four Manaketes! Ange, Bantu, Tiki and Xane! God I love their little group, even if Maia isn't there.

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maybe now you have figured it out; that's what bein' a friend is about

Chapter 23's title is taken from "Bein' Friends" from the Mother Soundtrack

I WILL ALWAYS GRAB A LYRIC FROM THE MOTHER SOUNDTRACK IF I CAN. THAT SOUNDTRACK IS SO GOOD.

...I missed an opportunity to make a Yuri Lowenthal gag and have Marth yell out "Holy hard nipples, it's cold!" Because Persona 4 Animation had some hilarious dubbing. Oh well, at least Marth isn't the only one complaining about the weather. Also love the reminder that Arran is ill, and YAY DRAGON LORE I love adding dragon lore!

Yep, like before, we smooshed two chapters into one, mostly because narrative-wise it worked for both of us. Also somehow I think we started the Ange/Xane ship here because of Ange's reaction, because she wasn't expecting that from Xane. XP

So, you thought that we were going to let Clarisse die? OH HO HO NO, REMEMBER MARTH'S VOW? I just love how this part turned out, because it reveals so many layers of lore in a reasonable way! And I love that Marth uses the word "evacuated" because THAT'S WHAT HAPPENED TO HIM.

And yes, I wanted more Welsh names and Rhiannon is such a pretty name!

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