Never Thought- The Commentaries: Chapter 34

[sorakh28]

friend of mine stay alive don't you leave me here

Chapter 34's title comes from "Friend of Mine" by Eve 6

Don't know the band, but the lyrics were perfect for this chapter.

Oh, we're going straight for the Wolf/Sedgar. Everyone can see it except them. XP With more battle planning, of course.

And more lore! Ange might have nightvision but doesn't always like using it, Jugdrali torch staves... as for the circlet that was gifted to Maia, guess which alt of Marth in Heroes wears said circlet. (Hint- three that doesn't have it are Default, Child and Engage Marth.)

NAGI! I love her and I'm glad she's back. But of course Wolf brings trouble again. So how many swords does Ange have by now? (Answer: Three- Ladyblade, Killing Edge, and Armorslayer.) Also I love that Nyna was being a firm, reasonable leader for a scene- she got to be badass in this story in her own way.

And then we get a scene with Wolf and Sedgar. Like Marth said, everyone obviously wants to chew out Wolf for his recklessness, but only Sedgar is the one who can get through him. I recall seeing the sentence part "Give them the full degree" in one of SRW30's DLC missions and thought it would make sense to write that in this part. BUT YES, START THE SHIPPING, FOCUS ON THE ANGST, IT'S AWESOME.

And Gotoh makes his last appearance. :/ Side stories involving him would be cool to write.

Comments

[sarajayechan]

I FUCKING LOVED WRITING THIS CHAPTER. I'd been waiting forever to write that scene of Sedgar yelling some sense into Wolf, I knew I wanted it to be emotional as fuck.

(I also loved writing Nyna in these stories. She's become more stern about recklessness after what happened with Camus lol.)

And Gotoh makes his last appearance. :/ Side stories involving him would be cool to write

YES. His relationships with the dragon crew, why he believes in Marth, etc.

[sorakh28]

I am down to write Anri getting the Falchion from Gotoh's perspective someday. :3

[sarajayechan]

YES!