When Beloved Turnabout accidentally reveals Fridge Horrors.

[sorakh28]

Sorakh28: Also, I had to show the Remilia thing to a friend, and...
elentir3
This is alarmingly accurate
sorakh28
...Explain. XP
elentir3
Doctors' hideous handwriting leading to potential overdoses
sorakh28
...OH.
Well that went dark fast.
SaraJaye: ...and I just realized if this is the case, then the shit case 2-2 refers to WAS Turner Grey's fault.
Sorakh28: ...oh my god we just added fridge horror to the canon AA games and here I was making fun of doctor's handwriting.
SaraJaye: OH DEAR
Writing this scene reminded me of that case almost immediately and then it hit me, Grey's writing was probably too hard for Mimi to read.

Comments

[sarajayechan]

OH MIMI MINEY, AS IF YOU WEREN'T PITIABLE ENOUGH DESPITE YOUR VENGEFUL ACTIONS.

[sorakh28]

I remember you writing that AU in which Ini survived, and- exhaustion PLUS being unable to decipher your boss' handwriting?! No wonder everything went to shit!

...Wonder if I should make a callback with Remilia. "I always have to triple check everything with the boss. My pharmaceutical teacher said she suspected that the whole Grey and Miney thing happened because she couldn't read what he wrote. My boss isn't as bad as I make it out to be, really, but you can never be careless in the healthcare industry."

...Also thinking of making Remilia a Joy who went to human healthcare instead of Pokémon healthcare like expected, but who studied the application of Pokémon moves on human health. (Oh god, I'm thinking too much on an NPC, help me!)

[sarajayechan]

I hadn't even considered the handwriting at the time, which would've made more sense for the evidence Phoenix needed to bust Grey. x3 A jerk boss, being exhausted, all that chaos AND bad handwriting...I bet Grey didn't even TRY to write legibly.

Oh God, yes to both of those things. (Phoenix probably felt bad for Mimi after her confession to the crime, but now he's gonna feel REALLY bad and think "did Maya really need to stand trial for Grey's murder when he wasn't exactly missed?")

Hey, NPCs are important! Especially in cases like this.

[sorakh28]

Can we make Grey even MORE of a jerkass? When I first read about the case, I was all, "Yeaaaah he had it coming."

UGGGGH POOR PHOENIX. I can totally see the reuse of that case's reminiscence theme when Remilia talks about it.

Remilia developed the same way BT did- just a silly idea that blew up so quick. ...Huh, did a medical professional ever took the stand to explain the medical charts on AA before? Because I might give Remilia a bigger role outta this.

[sarajayechan]

Yeah, apparently he was good at his profession but his personality was total shit. I hate to imagine his idea of bedside manner.

God, me too. And I'm imagining Acro's reminiscence theme for Red while he cries about Ash, and "Wandering Heart" for the Claypollo hurt/comfort scene.

(We gotta figure out a way to convert those RPs into prose, the one with Apollo venting to Clay and talking to red and the flashback to the h/c scene.)

...I don't think so. That could be interesting to use, though.

[sorakh28]

Probably nonexistent, if there's any indication.

What, no Pokémon song for Red's tears? XP jk jk, it's not a bad idea with the AA music, actually, I just thought we could bring more Pokémon music. Once Éclipse properly presents herself as a Ranger Correspondent, her theme could change from whatever Phoenix Wright song to Almia's Ranger Base theme.

(If we can find a way to implement them into the fanfic, I'm not bad at converting RP to prose. ...And we can always have gaiden chapters posted separately from the main story, too.)

Hey, it can be the first testimony, too. "To ease everyone's fears, I am allowed to confirm the victim is recovering nicely and should wake up anytime soon. The wounds I'm about to speak of has been mostly mended." Because she's a Joy with CRAZY nice bedside manners unlike a certain doctor.

[sarajayechan]

Oh, definitely, like the "Emotion" theme from Black and White, the creepy Old Chateau music from Sinnoh for any investigating done at night...Deoxys battle theme for when Clay gets all hyped up about space. XD And Iris's champion theme from B2W2 for Trucy!